Wednesday 4 November 2009
Section 1: Background to the Thriller Genre
Section 2: Research into Examples of Thriller Opening Scenes
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1. Red Eye
Section 3: Brainstorm of Ideas for your Film
Section 4: Audience Research - and Research into BBFC Film Classification System
Our audience research was to ask them questions about the Thriller genre and once we collected the information on our questionaires we came up with these graphs
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3. What do you look for in a Thriller?
This was an explaination anwser and people would say that they like to be thrilled, suspense, murder, action, guns, blood, twists, to be scared and a goood plot.
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6. What is your Favorite Thriller Movie?
Well we got a lot of different answers for this particular question because everyone has different tastes in different types of thrillers. We got thrillers like: Se7en, Red Eye, James Bond, The Dark Knight and 23.
7. What happens in your Favorite Thriller?
With this question we couldn't do a pie chart beacue it was more of an explanation question. So people would just fill in basically on the narrative of their favorite thriller movie.
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11. Which thriller film were you impressed with?
This question to find out what movies that pedestrians were impressed with when they watched them. Examples: Bourne Identity, Batman and Vantage Point.
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16. Where would be your Ideal setting for a Thriller?
Again we got mixed answers from the tastes of different people, some settings they said were in the city, in dark and creepy places, decay urban city and some people didn't mind where it would be set.
17. In your ideal thriller movie, what would happen?
This questions was designed to see how different people think how a thriller should be in their own imagination. The answers just an explanation on their ideal thriller.
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19. Who would be your ideal actor/actress to star in a thriller movie?
We got a mixture of different actors, some who a re big names and some who are fairly famous. Names of actors we got were: Angelina Jolie, Tom Hanks, Kirsten Belle, Milla Jovovich, Nicole Kidman, Will Smith, Bruce Willis and more.
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Film Classification System
Title:
INCOGNITO
Target Audience:
Our Target audience are viewers who are 15 years of age and over and the picture is an example of 15+ year teenagers
Film Classification:
We gave our film a Certificate of 15 because our Target Audience are the ages of 15 and over and our film has really sinister and disturbing points near the end of the film were it gets really violent with weapons and knives being used, with blood and violence and unnatural behaviour.
This is the exact meaning of this Certificate when you see it on DVDs, Cinemas etc.... "Suitable for 15 years and over, No-one younger than 15 may see a '15' film in the Cinema. No-one younger than 15 may rent or buy a '15' rated video work."
Section 5: Treatment
Treatment for Incognito
Incognito will be an unusual film with a twisted plot. It is a trail of betrayal and exploiting trust, that portrays serious consequences of jealousy.
Concept
A rich man struggling from stress is betrayed as his brother swaps his medication in order to be with his wife – however things take an unexpected turn as his intentions soon start to change.
Synopsis
Beginning: Starts with with Daniel, Clare & John in a living room, Daniel has gone to see his brother to get more medicine for his illness. But Clare has spiked his drink with a drug and John is distarcting Daniel. Daniel dies at the beginning but then you see John in a secret room in an angry mood with photo hangups in the room. Then we see flashback of what he has been doing to plan against Daniel with Clare.
Middle: 2 weeks before the death of Daniel we can see Clare and daniel getting married and playing happy couple together. Through out their marraige Johns jealousy increases and he starts stalking Clare and trying to convince her that they should kill Daniel and get everything he owns. She is horrified at first but then she agrres with the misdeed. Now they are making Daniel paranoid as well as making him sick with spiking his drinks. Finally Daniel is killed and John and Clare inherit everything.
End: Clare is enjoying her new life in the end but wonders why isn't John enjoying the inheritance. Plus she doesn't know where he is. John is starting to loose his mind and his greed is growing and he wants all Daniels belongings to himself and does not want to share with Clare. So he hunts Clare with bloodlust and murder on his hands. Clare runs in fear and regret for the misdeed she commited. Clare is murdered in the end, but John is arrested and convicted of both murders because the evidence allicates him. In the end the whole plan was a disaster.
Opening Scene
Starts with a glass of wine on a table that you see getting spiked by someone, then that person brings that drink to one of the male figures that is talking to another male figure. Then we see the female figure pass the wine to the man in the suit and he then drinks it, and then puts the glass back onto the table. Then we see the male doctor figure in the background of a secret room with hang ups of photos with the male figure looking upset. Then we see flashbacks of the man's past of him exchanging items with a female figure and seeing him writing a diary and ends with two photos, one being crossed out and one being circled. That includes the starting credits throughout the sequence.
Target Audience
The film should have a strong appeal for a wide audience, ranging from 18-27 years old yet the film is not an 18 certicate. It would appeal to audiences who enjoy suspense and twisted plots. The seriousness of the story will also appeal to older audiences as well as it has a different approach to them as the plot is of a different kind.
For this reason, the film will have a 15 certificate: as scenes of violence and drugs will be used, as well as bad language. This will help portray the characters attitudes and help the viewer understand the characters more.
Other Details
There will be no recognisable stars in the plot, as this will make the plot less revealing. Locations will be ordinary with sets such as the characters houses and the hospital etc.
Synopsis Detailed
The beginning of the film starts with Clare Redford spiking Daniel Redford’s (her husband) drink while Daniel receives a prescription from his brother Doctor John Redford, which is just to distract Daniel so Clare can spike Daniels drink. Then Clare picks up the wine and walks to Daniel and passes him the drink. Next Daniel drinks the wine and doesn’t realise its spiked, followed by a cut to a secret room that Doctor John has occupied with photo hang ups of Daniel and Clare with John looking through documents and prescriptions. John is upset and on edge in the background of the setting then John starts thinking back to what crime he has done and then we see a flashback of his misdeeds. The flashbacks are of him exchanging drugs and money with Clare and then we have two photos of Daniel crossed out in red marker pen and Clare photo circled. Now John has got rid of his brother, he now wants to get rid of Clare for his own selfish needs.
So its two weeks later before Johns & Clare’s crime was committed, at this time we get to see Daniel and Clare getting married. After that we see that they are living a happy and loving marriage with a great home and a lot of money. But John is jealous of his older brother Daniel because he has a beautiful wife a successful carrier as a well known business and John can’t stand his success even though John is a Doctor. So John stalks Clare and starts trying to convince Clare that they should kill Daniel so that they could both take all his money and success for themselves. At first Clare is horrified at the thought that John would want to kill his own brother. Once she rolls the idea in her head and s lot of convincing she decides to help John kill her husband and his brother. Throughout the middle of the moving they are having secret meetings and are planning on how to kill Daniel. They start by making him paranoid with death threats from an anonymous character. Also Clare is adding to the plan by spiking all Daniels drink with drinks that she has to buy from John so he can pay for them so that the missing drugs don’t look like they are being stolen. Throughout the spiking of the drink Daniel starts to get sick. Daniel sees his brother to get medicine to make him better and John exploits Daniels trust to give him medicine that Daniel believes will make him better and Daniel doesn’t ask about the medicine he is given because he trust his brother so much. As days go by his health keeps degenerating and Clare telling him that he will be better soon. Once Daniel goes to another appointment to see his brother, it his is last. John distracts Daniel while Clare adds another pill in another drink of Daniels and gives it him to drink to celebrate that he is starting to get better apparently. Suddenly Daniel falls to the ground and dies but not yet until seeing Clare with John, then they walk off and leave him to die.
Near the end of the film Daniels death was never looked into in depth and was classed as a mix up of prescriptions’, so no one has no idea what really happened to this big successful man. Now Clare is enjoying her new business and living the sweet life, but John is nowhere to be seen and Clare is getting worried and suspicious. John is starting to go mentally insane and is turning even more selfish and greedy because he wants all his brothers’ money and his business company. At an instant John goes to Clare’s with blood lust and murder on his hands. So John starts chasing Clare in her home and Clare is in tears with regret and sorrow of Daniels death. In the end Clare is brutally murdered. Then John is arrested and is convicted of Clare’s murder and they find documents on Daniel and plans on the death of him and they assume that only John planned both murders.
Section 6: Character Outlines and Script
Section 7: Production Material - Storyboards & Shotlists
Shot 1 – Establishment Shot
Shot 2 – Shallow focus of a glass of wine with a pill being dropped into the wine (spiked)
Shot 3 – Deep or shallow focus (DOF) to see two male figures in the background talking, while wine glass is been picked up by womanly hand and taken to them
Shot 4 – Over the shoulder the shot over man in suit with womanly figure
Shot 5 – extreme close-up – shallow or deep focuses, and then woman passes drink to man
Shot 6 – Text with black background – Perplex Productions, PP
Shot 7 – Wide shot of a secret room of the doctor with photo hang ups in the room with the doctor looking through his documents in the far back of the room
Shot 8 – Extreme Close-up of the man drinking the spiked wine
Shot 9 – Blackout then actors name – Doctor Actor
Shot 10 – Close-up of doctor writing in a diary with ghosting effect
Shot 11 – Blackout and Actresses name in black background
Shot 12 – Close-up of man putting empty wine glass on a table
Shot 13 – Black and White background with another actor’s name
Shot 14 – Two tracking shot coming from left to right and right to left of prescriptions and photos and they fade into each other.
Shot 15 – Close up of the doctor’s diary writing something in it with a ghosting effect.
Shot 16 – Point of view shot of the man looking at the female figure with the camera starting to shake and blur and blinking effect and then a collapse to the floor to show the man has been drugged.
Shot 17 – White and Black background with ‘Edited By’ title and names
Shot 18 – Close up of Doctor turning diary pages back to start with them turning blank to show flashback
Shot 19 – White and Black background with ‘Written By’ title and names
Shot 20 – Extreme close up of the doctors eye with a quick fade into white to signify a flashback
Shot 21 – wide shot in Black and white effect and making the cheque in colour with the woman and a man exchanging items.
Shot 22 – Close up of exchange in black and white and the item is only in colour
Shot 23 – Wide shot again in white and black exchanging a package to the woman with package in colour
Shot 24 – Close up of packet in colour being exchange
Shot 25 – Close up of arm dropping to signify the man has died
Shot 26 – White and Black background and title ‘Incognito’
Shot 27 – Close up of two photos of manly figure crossed out and womanly figure circled
Shot 28 – White and Black background with title ‘Directed By’ and names
Section 8: Recce and Location Sheets
Production Name (working title): 'Incognito'
Name of Location: Runcorn, Cheshire, UK
Area: Palacefields
Date of filming: 7/12/2009.
Section 9: Production Schedule
Directors: Matthew Boardman
Producers: Keayan Mistry & Amy Brown
Client:
Section 10: Edit Decision List
Production Title: Incognito
Counter Number - Shot 1
Shot Description - Establishing Shot of a House in the Evening
Shot Length - 00:00:03:11
Good Take: Yes/No - NO
Counter Number - Shot 2
Shot Description - Shallow focus of glass of wine being spiked
Shot Length - 00:00:04:02
Good Take: Yes/No - YES
Counter Number - Shot 3
Shot Description - More in depth focus to see men in background, also woman picking up wine
Shot Length - 00:00:01:12
Good Take: Yes/No - YES
Counter Number - Shot 4
Shot Description - Close up of a presription being passed
Shot Length - 00:00:02:13
Good Take: Yes/No - YES
Counter Number - Shot 5
Shot description - Woman passing drink to man in the suit - 2 shot & Medium shot
Shot Length - 00:00:04:05
Good Take: Yes/No - YES
Counter Number - Shot 6
Shot Description - Black Background and White Text
Shot Length - 00:00:02:09
Good Take: Yes/No - YES
Counter Number - Shot 7
Shot Description - Doctor in dark room acting frantic and photos hanging from a ceiling
Shot Length - 00:00:12:03
Good Take: Yes//No - YES
Counter Number - Shot 8
Shot Description - Extreme close up of man in suit drinking the wine
Shot Length - 00:00:03:23
Good Take: Yes/No - YES
Counter Number - Shot 9
Shot Description - Black Background and White Text
Shot Length - 00:00:01:07
Good Take: Yes/No - YES
Counter Number - Shot 10
Shot description - Doctor writing in a diary - Close up with Ghosting Effect
Shot Length - 00:00:11:05
Good Take: Yes/No - YES
Counter Number - Shot 11
Shot Description - Black Background with white text
Shot Length - 00:00:01:07
Good Take: Yes/No - YES
Counter Number - Shot 12
Shot Description - Man in suit walking and putting down glass
Shot Length - 00:00:05:21
Good Take: Yes/No - YES
Counter Number - Shot 13
Shot Description - Black Background with white text
Shot Length - 00:00:01:07
Good Take: Yes/No - YES
Counter Number - Shot 14a-b
Shot Description - Tracking Shot, Left to Right faded together with tracking shot, Right to Left
Shot Length - 00:00:06:31
Good Take: Yes/No - NO: too jumpy
Counter Number - Shot 15
Shot Description - Doctor still writing in diary with Ghosting Effect
Shot Length - 00:00:10:16
Good Take: Yes/No - YES
Counter Number - Shot 16
Shot Description - POV Shot of man collapsing with an effect that blurs his vision
Shot Length - 00:00:05:02
Good Take: Yes/No - YES
Counter Number - Shot 17
Shot Description - Black Background with white text
Shot Length - 00:00:02:17
Good Take: Yes/No - YES
Counter Number - Shot 18
Shot Description - Diary being flipped the the front of diary by has been faded with another flipped diary that is empty to give the feeling of time going back - Close up and Ghosting effect
Shot Length - 00:00:03:16
Good Take: Yes/No - YES
Counter Number - Shot 19
Shot Description - Black Background and White Text 'Written By'
Shot length - 00:00:02:17
Good Take: Yes/No - YES
Counter Number - Shot 20
Shot Description - Extreme close up of Doctors eye with a dip to white effect to signify a flashback
Shot Length - 00:00:03:18
Good Take: Yes/No - YES
Counter Number - Shot 21
Shot Description - Wide shot of guy and girl walking to eachother with a black and white effect
Shot Length - 00:00:04:05
Good Take: Yes/No - YES
Counter Number - Shot 22
Shot Description - Girl passing money to the guy with effect where you can only see the colour of her painted nail and the rest of the colours are BOW
Shot Length - 00:00:01:11
Good Take: Yes/No - YES
Counter Number - Shot 23
Shot Description - Guy receiving money and guy giving girl a envelope with BOW effect
Shot Length - 00:00:04:16
Goood Take: Yes/No - YES
Counter Number - 24
Shot Description - Close up of the guys hand passing the girl a 'confidential' envelope with the same effect as shot 22
Shot Length - 00:00:01:21
Good Take: Yes/No - YES
Counter Number - Shot 25
Shot Description - Extreme close up of Doctors eye opening after flashback
Shot Length - 00:00:01:24
Good Take: Yes/No - YES
Counter Number - Shot 26
Shot Description - Man in the suit hand falls to the floor to show he is dead and we extended the film to slow down the hand fall to dramatise death
Shot Length - 00:00:03:05
Good Take: Yes/No - YES
Counter Number - Shot 27
Shot Description - Black Background and White Text 'Directed By'
Shot Length - 00:00:04:16
Good Take: Yes/No - YES
Counter Number - Shot 28
Shot Description - Doctor crossing his victim out of a photo and now looking at his new victim in a camera with a blur effect to hide the next victim. Gradual zoom into the camera screen
Shot Length - 00:00:08:50
Good Take: Yes/No - YES
Counter Number - Shot 29
Shot Description - Black Background with a green title 'Incognito' with a blurry brush effect and then if fades into the title becoming fully clear to read
Shot Length - 00:00:06:16
Good Take: Yes/No - YES