Wednesday 4 November 2009

Section 1: Background to the Thriller Genre

Thriller Definition: from Film Studies dictionary
"Thriller is a loose genre term referring to any film that generates suspense and excitement as a major aspect of its Naratve"

Theory About Thrillers
G.K. Chesterton - The Transformed City
. Chesterton - Early 20th century writer of thriller stories
. Argued that thrillers took 'Urban Settings' and transformed them into exciting locations for dramatic stories
. E.G? - Seven, The Dark knight, The Bourne Identity, Miami Vice, Sin City
Northrop Frye - Heroic Romance
. Frye argued that thrillers were stories that took ordinary people and threw them into extraordinary situations
. E.G? - Spiderman, The Negotiator, War of the Worlds
John Cawelti - The Exotic
. Cawelti argued that thrillers took the elements of ordinary life and added an exotic element
. So Basically it adding 'Exotic' to Everyday Life (Mystery)
. E.G? - James bond, Wanted, Mr & Mrs Smith
W.H. Matthews - Mazes and Labyrinths
. Matthews writes about how human beings have a fascination for physical puzzles - often seen in mazes and labyrinths
. Thrillers often use the idea of a mysterious quest ina coonfined location that feels like a Labyrinths
. Labyrinths - greek mythology where the 'Minotaur' was confined
. E.G? - National Treasure, Davinci Code, Saw, Resident Evil, Indiana jones, The Mummy, The Lord of the Ring
Pascal Bonitzer - Partial vision
. Bonitzer discusses how in thriller the audience is given a partial view of things - with important details being obscured
. So the audience should only know so much
. E.G? - Cloverfield, Pandorum
Noel Carroll - Question and Answer
. Argues that thrillers are structured around a series of questions for which the audience is led to want the answers
. E.G? - The Strangers, X-Men The Last Stand
Roland Barthes - Enigma Codes
. Barthes analysed all narratives in the terms of codes that operate moment by moment
. Enigma Code - moment in narrative that leads the audience to ask questions
. Thrillers, enigma code are very important intelling the story in a suspenseful way
. This definition incorprates both W.H. Matthews and Noel Carroll
. E.G? - The Strangers, X-men The Last Stand, National Treasure, Davinci Code, Saw

Section 2: Research into Examples of Thriller Opening Scenes

Analysis on Opening Thriller Sequences
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1. Red Eye
NARRATIVE STRUCTURE
Structure of film is based round a girl that you see pictures of in a wallet and photos on the table next to keys. Then you have the mysterious man that takes the wallet from the table. Further on the man removes the credit cards from the wallet and looks at the picture of the girl in thee photo. Might have domestic story in the film, signify identity theft and that the characters hide important things in fish crates.
THRILLER CODES AND CONVENTIONS
Codes are making us ask questions e.g. Who is the girl in the photos? Who are the woman and man in the photo? Who do those keys belong to? Then you start to ask if is this house where this girl lives? When the wallet gets taken you ask why someone has taken the wallet & who? The close up of the wallet shows use two initials, so what do they stand for? Why are we getting close up of fish in the oopening sequuence? We see photos of buildings with close ups on them, does that mean that these building are targets? Plus we see blueprints, so what are they for? Once we see the mysterious man remove the credit cards we wonder why? However he looks at a thumbnail photo of the girl in the wallet, why is this man interested in her? Box is shown near the end taken out of a fish crate, whats in the metal box?
CAMERAWORK
In this opening scene there are lots of close ups, which don't show certain characters faces to build suspense and too make sure we don't know who the character is yet. We have a forward tracking shot to the wallet showing that its important. Get given over the shoulder shots on the characters to make them mysterious because you can't see their faces. Again you have forward tracking shot heading in to henchman opening fish crate. At the end of the opening sequence there is a low angle shot looking up at a high rised building.
MISE-EN-SCENE
First thing that you can notice in the opening sequence is that all characters are acting suspicious, like they are hiding something or planning something. When we see the photos on the side table, we can see a picture of a girl in graduate clothes telling us she is successful as well as eduacated and pretty. Another photo of her playing sports implying that she can defend herself and that she is strong. Further on we get a mysterious third photo which could be her parents. In the home there is a normal domestic setting, in addition we see random hennchman immediatly and it showing their faces informing us that there isn't any important characters being shown in the sequence. Followed by props of photos of buildings and blueprints which is suspicious. After that a mysterious man force opens a letter which illustrates this character as an angry person. Also implying that he is savage and maybe in a rush. We can see the man in the setting of a hotel with him holding the prop of the wallet and the photo within the wallet. In addition the henchman all look frantic and in a rush to get the metal box out of the fish crate. The setting of the film we assume that its based on is on a plane because of the title RED EYE - meaning long plane travel.
SOUND
Music in the opening scene are very dramatic and kinda spooky, as it goes on in the scene the music gets louder. Red eye title, when we see it you can hear a plane leering on a run way while some sounds change in volume to give more impact. Henchman taking crate apart you can hear the ice being cleared away quickly making us know that they are in a rush. In addition to the music, it sounds really mysterious and its a really generic thriller sound track. Also the music turns kinda earie after titles (fading) to give a creepy feel. Diegetic sound is used when the man puts his keys and wallet on the table with incorporated non-diegetic sound which is music. When doors close they give us the traditional creeking door also with the shower being turned on with non-synchronous sound meaning that the sound you can hear but can't see the noise being made. Also the noise hits with the action of the music which leads to a cressendo - builds up and then suddenly stops. The music in the opening scene you can hear cerebral music that tells us that someone is thinking.
EDITING
Almost all the edit points were all cuts and we had one scene were it dissolved to give a different effect. That includes very long takes and slow editing, we had takes seconds between 6-12 secoonds with some less or more than that.
GRAPHICS
The graphics at the beginning can give off meanings depending on the fonts size and colour of the titles and texts. During the titles in this film you can see the bold lettering and simple text instead of fancy text as well the text moving into the distance building mytery, and the text colour black and white is showing binary opposition of good and evil. However the main titles colour is red giving us the sense and meaning of danger passion etc... Finally there was no background. Just plain and simple.
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2. State of Play
NARRATIVE STRUCTURE
Structure of this movie could be a political thriller because you get a scene showing Washington, with a unknown man being chased by a mystery chaser. Could have frantic chases and characters in the narrative because of the man being chased by a pursuer who in the end of the opening sequence gets killed.
THRILLER CODES AND CONVENTIONS
Codes we get looking at this beginning sequence is who is this man who is running and why is he running as well as who from? Then when the runner is shot dead the question arises that why did the black coated man shoot the runner guy, plus who iis he and what has he got in that metal breifcase that he is holding? Before all that why was the runner so frantiic and scared?
CAMERAWORK
At the start of the sequence you are given an arial shot to show us the audience where this film it set. Then we just have still shots of the area until we see a man running from someone. Also we have pan shots of the running man crossing the road irresponsibly as well as in the alley way with the pizz man getting shot and a pan of him coming past the killer. Also steady can is used. Through out the sequecne you can see a point of view shot (POV) from what looks like the chaser looking from a bit of the distance of the man who is running from the chaser. Plus we have low angle and high angle shots of the runner jumping off great height obstacles just to get away from the chaser, desparation. Finall y we have a close up of the runners face to show his emotions and teeth and then we can label him on our opinion of the type of person he might be, e.g. drug addict, slum etc. Near the very end of the opening scene you have a still shot at the end that doesn't follow the killer to build up mystery and to tell us that we are not going to be folowing his side of the story in this film. Then a forward tracking shot to the pizza man who ahs been shot to sygnify he is still alive.
MISE-EN-SCENE
Setting of the film is Washington annd it suggests that this thriller is going to be a political thriller. Then we get the setting of the busy street telling us that the city is always very busy and crowded. We have the composition of pedestrians in the streets and then we get an old couple which shows a fragile people in the city and then they get hit into by the man who is running and he knocks them over. Where the man runs into a shop with fragile antiques and then breaks them while he runs through them. That makes the setting erratic and anxious. After the man finishs going through the alleys, he hise in a bigger alley behind rubbish and barrel tanks, in a dark and griity setting. Once the man is hidden you can see his yellow teeth which can imply to us, the audience that he might be a drug dealer or user or even part of a gang. The chaser is then revealed in black dark clothing signifying that he doesn't want to be notice especially since his gun (prop) has a silencer attached to it. The composition of the chaser shooting the chaser makes him out as an executioner. Then we get a guy in pizza delivery clothing so we obviously know that the man on the bicycle is a pizza boy. When the pizz boy sees whaats haapened he speeds up on his bike. Then the chaser has to run away so he can't get caught by anyone else so he has to remain secret to characters that are in the film.
SOUND
In this pening sequence we have a lot of diegetic sound being used to set the scene. The diegetic sounds through the scene are from the old people getting hit into and you can see them be bumped into. Then we can see the runner get hit by the motoor scooter and since we can see and hear what has happened that makes us feel his pain. We can then also see the antiques smashing with the smashing noises as well as the runner running and skidding across the floor and banging into barrels he hides behind. All those components build up suspense to a asynchronous bullet sound hitting the runner, then it becomes synchronous once we see the shooter firing the bullet from the gun. To the noises start off erratic and then come to a sudden stop to end the struggle. That struggle comes from the runner from us hearing him grunting and makes sounds of pin, but they come to a stop once he is killed, which signifies he is now silent and even relieve of his fear. Back to the sounds creating the scene, we can hear helicopter sounds and police sirens which can connote the city is a danger zone and has a lot of crime. Throughout the sound we have non-diegetic sound which is like music because it doens't come from the natural world. The music in the sequence sounds mysterious and anonymous to make characters seem secretive. The music sounds like a thriller type music.
EDITING
You have in the editing of this sequence, long takes and this helps build up the scene at this is at the beginning of the opening sequence of the movie. But when we see the man running across the round you have very short takes and this helps build up speed of the scene and sets the pace.
GRAPHICS
Universal titles as well as other working titles and logos to show us who has created the movie. The setting of the movie is the background for the titles when they pop out. Then later the title "State Of Play" appears in a black and white background and falshes 'red' and 'blue'. The colour 'blue' can signify a sense of calm and the 'red' can give us a sense of danger. Also they both could represent the 'American Flag'.
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3. Strangers on a Train
NARRATIVE STRUCTURE
The beginning of the sequence in this thriller gives us the narrative that maybe to men who have just met are going to help eachother kill someone. So you've got a successful sports man who maybe wants to kill his wife. Then we have a in your face man who wants to kill his dad. Then we a led to think that the narrative might be the two men swapping eachothers murder victims. Two characters are a man and Bruno who is telling the man about his plan of murder. Emphasizes that the murder will be a murder with the man humoring Bruno about his "great" plan! So we all know that Bruno then thinks the man is on board with the idea. Plus fame and celebrity commentary - civilians have power over famous people because they can know more about you than you know yourself because of papparazzi etc...
THRILLER CODES AND CONVENTIONS
So now we ask questions on why did Bruno just tell a complete stranger about his murder and why did he choose him? Plus how long has he been planning this type of crime for? Why does't bruno like his Dad, what happened between them when he lived with his father? Once the beginning sequence ends we ask whats going to happen next? Conventions - we get the music change in the sequence then it sounds more like a thriller tune from a happy and humorous tune. When we are put in the train we get a creepy sensual guy suddenly having a meeting on the train. Further more the sounf was non-conventional and the sequence relied on the dialogue.
CAMERAWORK
The camera at the beggining of opening sequence you get are wide shot of an arch building into train station implying that something big is going to happen. Then we get given a low level shot of Bruno's bright white shoes showing he is anonynous at this time, same with the other low level shot of the other man with the black shoes. Since they used the same shot on both of them could show that both their lives are going to intwine with eachother. Once they are on the train you get a point of view (POV) shot from Bruno's perspective and now his plan has come into action. Then we see both characters that are now not anonynous anymore with a two shot, showing a connection between them and that the fates have now collided.
MISE-EN-SCENE
The start of scene we have a setting showing an arch building of the grand train station which is then showing a grand concept in the narrative plot. Just by the setting of the area we can tell this movie is set in America. Soon after we get the american cabs that are also anonymous so shows mystery in the film. Then we get Brunos outrageous shoes that a bright white which reflects his personality of wild, creepy and in your face. The other man we get a prop of a tennis racket telling the ausience that he plays tennis and he had plain shoes reflecting that he is more bland, normal and straight forward than Bruno is. In the scene when every one is going through to get on the train we get slightly confused because we can see Bruno with his shoes but we can't see the other man meaning he blends in with the crowd and Bruno is like a light in the dark. The setting of the train shows the composition of every one on the trains and they are all strangers to eachother. That setting of every one being strangers to eachother highlights that humanity goes on with life with strangers. Further on we get the view of the train tracks, this is a metaphor to tell us that these two mens paths are going to intwine and cross into eachother. Adding on to that we have the train turning probably showing what the men are going to do is going to turn for the worst. Then we have Bruno with his stupid to weare for his Mum letting audience know he's a mummies boy. Also just before they start to talk to eachother they met buy their feet touching, was this accidental or fate, we can only guess and thats when their identities are finally revealed as well.
SOUND
For starters the music is epic and grand and not at all scary and creepy as well as a bit of romance which is strange because its supposed to be a thriller. So its not typically thriller music. However the music changes when shoes come out the cabs - gives off a "Tom & Jerry" feel. So this music implies that Bruno is probably and excitable person since the music came on when he got out of the cab first which could also mean that his character could be very annoying also. Both characters are moving with music and that builds up tension. Again since they are moving together with music their lives are connected somehow. Finally the music starts to turn more triller like when Bruno gets onto the train and now its mysterious. Then the dialogue of Bruno, "I do admire people who do things" signifying that he like people who seize the moment rather than leave it. So it basically means that he wishes that he could have gone through with murdering his dad. Before that Bruno said that "I don't talk much" but its a lie because he does nothing but talk that signifies him as an outgoing person and a bit of a nutter.
EDITING
Quick cut editing of both characters walking into the same station signifying that both Bruno's life and the mans life are going to intwine. Also reverse shot editing to show a conversation between the two characters.
GRAPHICS
The titles are big, bold and obviously whire becaue its a Black and White movie. The lettering is squared and has drop shadows and old fashioned text since its an old film. Plus there is a mixture of bold title text and hand writing title text.
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4. The Dark Knight
NARRATIVE STRUCTURE
The narrative structire you get from the opening scene of The Dark Knight is that the city is full of crime and that the main villain in the film that the narrative is based on is a guy who calls himself the Joker who seems to be a very disturbed and crazy man.
THRILLER CODES AND CONVENTIONS
There are lots of questions in this opening scene, you want to know who is the Joker? Why are all the mob theives killing eachother while they are robbing a bank? Why does the villain put a fake grenade in the bankers mouth? Why do they need the money from the bank? What have they set out to acheive from robbing the bank? Why is Gotham City in such a state of criminal actions?
CAMERAWORK
The opening scene of The Dark Knight Starts off with an ariel shot of tall buildings in the city with the ariel shot getting closer to the windows of a certain building. This ariel shot is leading the audience to where the action is. You see a tracking shot being used with the camera tilting slowly down to a man in a siut with a clown mask in his hands. The camera gets closer to the mask signifying that this man might be a bit of a clown and since its a mask that he could be getting ready to commit a crime. We have got another ariel shot of two criminals zip lining from one building to another with wide shot looking down at them which is showing how high they are up in the air and what lengths they are going to just to commit a crime. Camera in car to watch the criminals have a conversation - 3 shot & Close ups. You have pan shots to keep up with the criminals quickly heading into the bank. You have fast tracking shots moving back from the front of the criminals to emphasize how quickly they have taken over the bank. Close ups of grenades to signify danger. Wide shots to see the area they are in which is a bank. We have close ups and medium shots to see movements and reactions e.g. the banker. High angle shots to look down at the money to show they have stolen a lot of it. High angle shot looking doown at banker signifying he is weak and vulnerable. Close up and high angle of jokers face signifying he's in control.
MISE-EN-SCENE
Setting of a city area so its going to be a highly populated place. Criminals have masks to hide their identity telling us they are going to do a crime. They have equipment thats going to help them rob the bank and get on the roof of the bank. Clothes are not bright in colour and they are wearing gloves so they don't want to be noticed or caught. Guy with a clown mask at the side of his leg, clowns are funny but the clown mask looks sad. So it can describe this man as a humerous person but in the wrong kind of way. He also has a bag which could contain stuff that is going to help him rob the bank. Pedestrians walking every where like normal day in the city life - busy. A van he gets into which looks old and worn out tells us they are not really reach maybe want low profile and that this is their get away car. Guns so they are criminals and they need fire power to help them to complete their crime. More equipment to hack into bank security systems which tells us they came prepared and that this crime was planned. Setting looks like what you expect a bank to loo, clean, organized and little tables and pens and main desks to sort out your banking life. Technical wiring for the banks security and the man hacking into the systems implies that these criminals are smart. Props of grenades which is an immediate sign of danger. Big metal vault telling us that this is where the money is and it needs to be protected and kept safe. Prop of a vault opener that the criminal has showing that he has come prepared. Banker wearing suit showing that he is a well paid man and that he is very proffesional. Bags ready so we immediately know they are going to take something from the vault. See props of lots of money and deposit boxes so we know that the criminal is inside the vault. Plus the vault looks very organized. School bus crashes into bank and only the last criminal standing knows about it telling us that he is deceiving everyone. Joker with face paints on tells us that he is a bit wweird and strange because he is a grown man and kids are the ones usually getting the faces painted for fun. All the school busses coming at the same time shows that he planned this crime to start and end ay specific times.
SOUND
First of all you have gun shots that are synchronous sounds. Music starts of mysterious. Then the music gets a faster beat and thats letting us know some action is going to take place. That is mixed with mysterious earie noise to let mystery build. Now the action starts because the beat kicks in. Then it builds up as if the tension in staring to build. With the music you have diegetic sound incorporated like the guy zip lining, cars skidding, doors closing, smashing windows smashing and buildings smashing.
EDITING
The whole opening of the scene its just cut editing that has some fast cut editing to build up suspense and some long takes to show whats happening in the area. But thats pretty much everything on editing.
GRAPHICS
The only graphics that are on the opening sequence is the company logos which seem to be tinted blue like the bat symbol that is formed from smoke which is the title without using text. The tint blue can mean neutral and you can link that to the movie that everyone in the world innocent and guilty people are all the same.
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5. Vancancy
NARRATIVE STRUCTURE
The narrative we get is a couple are travelling and they need to rest after a long trip and they are on a road he took as a short cut which we the audience immediately think is going to lead into danger. E.g. empty motel that no one goes to and the owners might be psychopathes.
THRILLER CODES AND CONVENTIONS
Questions on where are the couple going? Why are they driving so late? and gives us conventions that the movie is going to be dark and evil because of the dark setting and that it will be near a motel because they seem to want to stop and rest.
CAMERAWORK
You have close ups of characters face to show the expressions on there face and to watch them have a conversation. Long ariel shot too see the area and a car driving on the road. Low camera on the floor to see the car come round the corner of the road with a tracking shot going back to show the raccoon on the road which we don't realise is there until we see it and they nearly crash.
MISE-EN-SCENE
Got woodlands that indiicates that they are kind of in the midddle of knowhere and its also very dark so its dangerous to drive in and the dark is scary. You have the couple wearing plainclothes which just ells us that they are travelling and they don't have to wear anything special.
SOUND
The sound is of night time sounds such as crickets and the odd tree making noises and that helps the scenary that its late and that its time for bed. Plus the car skidding noise indicates us that they are in danger because we think they are going to get hurt from crashing the car. Then you have music that builds up tension and danger and then does a quick cresendo to when thee guy sees the raccoon onn the road and tries to dodge the raccoon.
EDITING
You have the graphics text fading into a video transition to the cars number plate. There are edit cuts to show a conversation (reverse editing) and the cuts go faster when they are about to crash.
GRAPHICS
The text is big and bold and use the colours of red yellow and white. The red can stand for blood and death and the white could give us the sign of her is the light to heaven because you might die. Since the text has a chaotic composition this could tell us that there might be characters in the film that a weird and very abnormal and crazy.
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6. The Shining
NARRATIVE STRUCTURE
From th opening scene from the shining we get a narrative that we get from the area is that its going to have a lot going on because of the connotations of the space there is in the camera shot. Since we see so many shots of the different areas like snow, grass, mountains etc. This can signify there is going to be a lot of changes and twist in the story. Since we can see such a large are that looks reaaly deserted, it connotes isolation. Since the opening scene is so long of the same thing that signifies that whatever is going to happen is going to seem like a long and traumatic time for the characters.
THRILLER CODES AND CONVENTIONS
The Shining has codes like why are we following that yellow car?, who is in the yellow car?, where are they? where are they going?, so those questions are building up anticipation on whats going to happen in the movie. The conventions of the movie show that this is going to be a very mysterious and maybe even scary film because we don't know what going to happen and people don't like that.
CAMERAWORK
The only camera work we get in the shining opening sequence is an ariel shot that if following a yellow car. So this could only connote that this narrative might have involved with the paranormal since the camera is so high in the sky where heaven is, and thats where ghostd are.
MISE-EN-SCENE
First of all the area is very big and this connotes freedom and also isolation from the population of the world. Adding to that we see a car on a round with lots of trees around the area and that again connotes isolation and also fear. Since its sunny the area looks warm and that can signify the people in the car to be warm and happy people. However when the scenery changes to the mountains that can present them as rigid and maybe tough people to get along with. Then we see a yellow car which connotes the people in the car are bright and happy people and I said about the sunny day. But soon after we get and area where snow is everywhere, this can signify that a massive change is going to happen to the peopel in the car in personality or even death (cold bodies). Then we see a big house which presents the people in the car as rich or that they are coming here for a holiday.
SOUND
The sound has a minor key and played by organs. This gives a ghost feel to the atmosphere because pipe organs a played in churches and the dead are buried and become spirits. So the music gives connotations of evil and fear, as the music carries on we can hear an eerie noise which can signify the paranormal might be following the car. Near the end we hear a strange noise maybe played by strings, it sounds kind of like a creepy scream, this give connotations of fear and danger. Music in non-diegetic sound.
EDITING
There is one dissolve cut to another area which could signify a disturbance to the car we end up following with the long takes that are being use which can also connotae the long drive the people are having to reach their destination. We also get cuts that show the same car but in different areas, this is showing the journey and since the areas change this can signify a lot is going to change to the whoever is in the car.
GRAPHICS
The text colour is blue, this colour has connotations of serenity and infinity however also can connote sadness. That can tell us that this movie might have a twist in emotions and change of the atmosphere mood. Also they use an effect that makes the text move up and out of the camera view. This can again connotes different personalities or area moods changing all the time that most likely keeps the audience on the edge of their seats.
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Section 3: Brainstorm of Ideas for your Film

Six Ideas we came up with while Brain Storming
Before me and my group could start our filming for our thriller we had to have a brainstorm first to get an idea on what our theiller sequence is going to be about. So we all got our note pads out and our pens and started discussing different storylines that we could possibly do. So through out the brain storm we cam up with 6 Ideas and they were:
Title - Tracks - This idea was based near a train station, since if we want to record near a train station we could have because that area would be available to us. The idea was that two people, a mother and a daughter are waiting for a train on one side of the platforms while another mysterious person on the other side of the stations platforms would be on the oother side just staring at the little girl.
Title - My Diary - Idea was that the sequence would have a mysterious man writing a diary and then we would see flashbacks of events that have happened in the past, which is a murder. The narrative of this thriller is about a guy stalking a girl and in the end he kills her which he then writes a diary about what he has done hence the flashback, but also we wants to see louds of diarys around him showing he has done this type of action a few times.
Title - Obssession - This was based on one boy in a school/college who is obsessed with one girl he sees everyday while they are in school/college. One day his obssession grows and then he keeps bothering her and stalking her, harrassing her and also hurting her. Soon its starts to get violent which gets all her friends around hurt by this obssessed person.
Title - Culture/Religion - we didn't give this idea and official name, but its based around crimes being caused by an ordinary persons religion, like being gods messeger and helping doing his deeds or some one doing deeds for the sake of his family heritages culture and beleifs.
Title - Conspiracy - Idea was about a consiracy about some ones murder, meaning that theres more then what the eye can see. So some one in the thriller sees the murder but doesn't beleive what has happened and whats to dig up the real dirt from the case. Which then will land her is a bad situation of regret and horror when she is getting hunt down and stopped from finding out the truth on this conspiracy.
Title - Drug Related - Couldn't think of a suitable title, but we came up of a thriller that was drug related, but coundln't think of what the entire narrative of the thriller be. Just knew that it would have cops and detectives in the thriller because its and every day crime that is alwayd under investigation in th real world.
Final Idea
Our final decision for our thriller came together by looking at all the ideas we came up with and then we put them all togther to make our final idea for our thriller. We got the idea of using a drug in our thriller from the drug related crime thriller, we won't a little consiracy, we won't a charcter to be obssessed, but with different intentions & we also wanted the criminal in the thriller to be writing a diary of his actions and intentions. But with coming up with the sequence we had to make sure we had the time to shoot the thriller and if we have the props, so were there were problems we had to changed them to the best of our own resources.

Section 4: Audience Research - and Research into BBFC Film Classification System




Graphs From Our Questionaires





Our audience research was to ask them questions about the Thriller genre and once we collected the information on our questionaires we came up with these graphs

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3. What do you look for in a Thriller?

This was an explaination anwser and people would say that they like to be thrilled, suspense, murder, action, guns, blood, twists, to be scared and a goood plot.


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6. What is your Favorite Thriller Movie?

Well we got a lot of different answers for this particular question because everyone has different tastes in different types of thrillers. We got thrillers like: Se7en, Red Eye, James Bond, The Dark Knight and 23.







7. What happens in your Favorite Thriller?

With this question we couldn't do a pie chart beacue it was more of an explanation question. So people would just fill in basically on the narrative of their favorite thriller movie.






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11. Which thriller film were you impressed with?

This question to find out what movies that pedestrians were impressed with when they watched them. Examples: Bourne Identity, Batman and Vantage Point.







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16. Where would be your Ideal setting for a Thriller?

Again we got mixed answers from the tastes of different people, some settings they said were in the city, in dark and creepy places, decay urban city and some people didn't mind where it would be set.



17. In your ideal thriller movie, what would happen?

This questions was designed to see how different people think how a thriller should be in their own imagination. The answers just an explanation on their ideal thriller.



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19. Who would be your ideal actor/actress to star in a thriller movie?

We got a mixture of different actors, some who a re big names and some who are fairly famous. Names of actors we got were: Angelina Jolie, Tom Hanks, Kirsten Belle, Milla Jovovich, Nicole Kidman, Will Smith, Bruce Willis and more.




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Film Classification System


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INCOGNITO




Target Audience:


Our Target audience are viewers who are 15 years of age and over and the picture is an example of 15+ year teenagers




Film Classification:




We gave our film a Certificate of 15 because our Target Audience are the ages of 15 and over and our film has really sinister and disturbing points near the end of the film were it gets really violent with weapons and knives being used, with blood and violence and unnatural behaviour.

This is the exact meaning of this Certificate when you see it on DVDs, Cinemas etc.... "Suitable for 15 years and over, No-one younger than 15 may see a '15' film in the Cinema. No-one younger than 15 may rent or buy a '15' rated video work."

Section 5: Treatment

Treatment for Incognito
Incognito will be an unusual film with a twisted plot. It is a trail of betrayal and exploiting trust, that portrays serious consequences of jealousy.
Concept
A rich man struggling from stress is betrayed as his brother swaps his medication in order to be with his wife – however things take an unexpected turn as his intentions soon start to change.
Synopsis
Beginning: Starts with with Daniel, Clare & John in a living room, Daniel has gone to see his brother to get more medicine for his illness. But Clare has spiked his drink with a drug and John is distarcting Daniel. Daniel dies at the beginning but then you see John in a secret room in an angry mood with photo hangups in the room. Then we see flashback of what he has been doing to plan against Daniel with Clare.
Middle: 2 weeks before the death of Daniel we can see Clare and daniel getting married and playing happy couple together. Through out their marraige Johns jealousy increases and he starts stalking Clare and trying to convince her that they should kill Daniel and get everything he owns. She is horrified at first but then she agrres with the misdeed. Now they are making Daniel paranoid as well as making him sick with spiking his drinks. Finally Daniel is killed and John and Clare inherit everything.
End: Clare is enjoying her new life in the end but wonders why isn't John enjoying the inheritance. Plus she doesn't know where he is. John is starting to loose his mind and his greed is growing and he wants all Daniels belongings to himself and does not want to share with Clare. So he hunts Clare with bloodlust and murder on his hands. Clare runs in fear and regret for the misdeed she commited. Clare is murdered in the end, but John is arrested and convicted of both murders because the evidence allicates him. In the end the whole plan was a disaster.
Opening Scene

Starts with a glass of wine on a table that you see getting spiked by someone, then that person brings that drink to one of the male figures that is talking to another male figure. Then we see the female figure pass the wine to the man in the suit and he then drinks it, and then puts the glass back onto the table. Then we see the male doctor figure in the background of a secret room with hang ups of photos with the male figure looking upset. Then we see flashbacks of the man's past of him exchanging items with a female figure and seeing him writing a diary and ends with two photos, one being crossed out and one being circled. That includes the starting credits throughout the sequence.
Target Audience
The film should have a strong appeal for a wide audience, ranging from 18-27 years old yet the film is not an 18 certicate. It would appeal to audiences who enjoy suspense and twisted plots. The seriousness of the story will also appeal to older audiences as well as it has a different approach to them as the plot is of a different kind.
For this reason, the film will have a 15 certificate: as scenes of violence and drugs will be used, as well as bad language. This will help portray the characters attitudes and help the viewer understand the characters more.
Other Details
There will be no recognisable stars in the plot, as this will make the plot less revealing. Locations will be ordinary with sets such as the characters houses and the hospital etc.

Synopsis Detailed
The beginning of the film starts with Clare Redford spiking Daniel Redford’s (her husband) drink while Daniel receives a prescription from his brother Doctor John Redford, which is just to distract Daniel so Clare can spike Daniels drink. Then Clare picks up the wine and walks to Daniel and passes him the drink. Next Daniel drinks the wine and doesn’t realise its spiked, followed by a cut to a secret room that Doctor John has occupied with photo hang ups of Daniel and Clare with John looking through documents and prescriptions. John is upset and on edge in the background of the setting then John starts thinking back to what crime he has done and then we see a flashback of his misdeeds. The flashbacks are of him exchanging drugs and money with Clare and then we have two photos of Daniel crossed out in red marker pen and Clare photo circled. Now John has got rid of his brother, he now wants to get rid of Clare for his own selfish needs.
So its two weeks later before Johns & Clare’s crime was committed, at this time we get to see Daniel and Clare getting married. After that we see that they are living a happy and loving marriage with a great home and a lot of money. But John is jealous of his older brother Daniel because he has a beautiful wife a successful carrier as a well known business and John can’t stand his success even though John is a Doctor. So John stalks Clare and starts trying to convince Clare that they should kill Daniel so that they could both take all his money and success for themselves. At first Clare is horrified at the thought that John would want to kill his own brother. Once she rolls the idea in her head and s lot of convincing she decides to help John kill her husband and his brother. Throughout the middle of the moving they are having secret meetings and are planning on how to kill Daniel. They start by making him paranoid with death threats from an anonymous character. Also Clare is adding to the plan by spiking all Daniels drink with drinks that she has to buy from John so he can pay for them so that the missing drugs don’t look like they are being stolen. Throughout the spiking of the drink Daniel starts to get sick. Daniel sees his brother to get medicine to make him better and John exploits Daniels trust to give him medicine that Daniel believes will make him better and Daniel doesn’t ask about the medicine he is given because he trust his brother so much. As days go by his health keeps degenerating and Clare telling him that he will be better soon. Once Daniel goes to another appointment to see his brother, it his is last. John distracts Daniel while Clare adds another pill in another drink of Daniels and gives it him to drink to celebrate that he is starting to get better apparently. Suddenly Daniel falls to the ground and dies but not yet until seeing Clare with John, then they walk off and leave him to die.
Near the end of the film Daniels death was never looked into in depth and was classed as a mix up of prescriptions’, so no one has no idea what really happened to this big successful man. Now Clare is enjoying her new business and living the sweet life, but John is nowhere to be seen and Clare is getting worried and suspicious. John is starting to go mentally insane and is turning even more selfish and greedy because he wants all his brothers’ money and his business company. At an instant John goes to Clare’s with blood lust and murder on his hands. So John starts chasing Clare in her home and Clare is in tears with regret and sorrow of Daniels death. In the end Clare is brutally murdered. Then John is arrested and is convicted of Clare’s murder and they find documents on Daniel and plans on the death of him and they assume that only John planned both murders.

Section 6: Character Outlines and Script

Character Outlines
In our Thriller we have three main charatcers which are:
Dr John Redford (Brother of Daniel) .......... played by LOUIS SMITH
Daniel Redford (Husband of Clares) ........ played by DANIEL BOARDMAN
Clare Redford (Wife of Daniel) .......... played by JESSICA SHIRLEY
Dr John Redford
The Doctor is a scheming character that is after one thing, he is after his brothers fame and Daniels hard working fortune and he will ddo anything to get his hands on it. John in this film becomes and unstable character and starts becoming irrational and selfish and gets cosumed by his own greed.
Clare Redford
Clare is actually the most loving and caring person you'll meet, but she is harrassed and in the end persuaded by John to help kill Daniel for his money. At first she seems like a character that knows right from wrong but ends up becoming a deluded character and becomes a coniving women.
Daniel Redford
Poor husband, he is one of the most sucessful men alive from his pesurverance and his dedication to working hard, he is a confident yet a kind and gentle man. Who cares for his wife a lot. Daniel ends up getting ill when his brother keeps giving him an unknown drug that is suppose to make him better, and Clare is helping John pay for this medicine and making sure Daniel takes the medicine in order to kill him off discretely, so "till death do us part" seems very ironic in this thriller.
Script
Living Room Scene - No Dialogue
Clare: Spike the glass of wine
Daniel & John: Talking in the background
Clare: Pick up the glass and take it the Daniel
John: Pass Daniel the prescrition for the medicine
Daniel: Receive the prescription for the medicine
Clare: Stand next to Daniel and put your hand on his shoulder and pass the wine to him
Daniel: Receive the wine from Clare
Daniel: Drink the wine
(time passes by)
Daniel: Walk to table and put down the empty glass
Clare & John: Stand togther and look at Daniel when he turns around and falls
Daniel: Hand falls to the floor
Secret Room Scene - No Dialogue
John: Standing at desk shufferling papers round and photos as well
John: Writing in a diary about his life
John: Stand and look into the camera and then blink hard
John: Pick up the pen and and cross out Daniel in the photo and pick up the camra and look at his next target Clare
Outside Scene - No Dialogue
Clare & John: Walk up to eachother
Clare: Passes money to John
John: Takes money and takes out an envelope and gives it to Clare
Clare: Takes the 'Confidential' envelope
Clare & John: They both walk away in opposite directions

Section 7: Production Material - Storyboards & Shotlists

StoryBoards - Storyboard has changed slightly while we have been filming









Storyboard Descriptions


Shot 1 – Establishment Shot

Shot 2 – Shallow focus of a glass of wine with a pill being dropped into the wine (spiked)

Shot 3 – Deep or shallow focus (DOF) to see two male figures in the background talking, while wine glass is been picked up by womanly hand and taken to them

Shot 4 – Over the shoulder the shot over man in suit with womanly figure

Shot 5 – extreme close-up – shallow or deep focuses, and then woman passes drink to man

Shot 6 – Text with black background – Perplex Productions, PP

Shot 7 – Wide shot of a secret room of the doctor with photo hang ups in the room with the doctor looking through his documents in the far back of the room

Shot 8 – Extreme Close-up of the man drinking the spiked wine

Shot 9 – Blackout then actors name – Doctor Actor

Shot 10 – Close-up of doctor writing in a diary with ghosting effect

Shot 11 – Blackout and Actresses name in black background

Shot 12 – Close-up of man putting empty wine glass on a table

Shot 13 – Black and White background with another actor’s name

Shot 14 – Two tracking shot coming from left to right and right to left of prescriptions and photos and they fade into each other.

Shot 15 – Close up of the doctor’s diary writing something in it with a ghosting effect.

Shot 16 – Point of view shot of the man looking at the female figure with the camera starting to shake and blur and blinking effect and then a collapse to the floor to show the man has been drugged.

Shot 17 – White and Black background with ‘Edited By’ title and names

Shot 18 – Close up of Doctor turning diary pages back to start with them turning blank to show flashback

Shot 19 – White and Black background with ‘Written By’ title and names

Shot 20 – Extreme close up of the doctors eye with a quick fade into white to signify a flashback

Shot 21 – wide shot in Black and white effect and making the cheque in colour with the woman and a man exchanging items.

Shot 22 – Close up of exchange in black and white and the item is only in colour

Shot 23 – Wide shot again in white and black exchanging a package to the woman with package in colour

Shot 24 – Close up of packet in colour being exchange

Shot 25 – Close up of arm dropping to signify the man has died

Shot 26 – White and Black background and title ‘Incognito’

Shot 27 – Close up of two photos of manly figure crossed out and womanly figure circled

Shot 28 – White and Black background with title ‘Directed By’ and names